My experience is that students are receptive to these rubrics and fine them more valuable perhaps than the lengthy end notes I once wrote. I still write in the margins on a final draft and often include a short narrative note - but I use a rubric now on which which I highlight the student's achievement.
Here is Sarah Bereiter's grading rubric for her first assignment.
Evaluation of Writing – Grading Rubric
for Essay 1
Author:
_________________________ Assignment: ____ Date: _____
Scale
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Focus
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1. Effectively, creatively, and
successfully addresses the prompt.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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2. Maintains a strong focus on
the thesis throughout the essay.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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Development, Support, and Organization
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3. Reveals evidence of critical and
creative thinking.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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4. Supports the main idea
through effective use of details, explanation of assertions, and description.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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5. Presents ideas in a clear and
logical order.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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6. Uses transitions effectively
to connect sentences and paragraphs.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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Readability, Style, and Format
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7. Contains few spelling,
syntax, word-usage or punctuation errors.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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8. Uses a tone that is
appropriate to the audience and to the writing task, and strives to have an
original voice.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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9. Demonstrates strong command
of language, and vocabulary is appropriate for college-level writing.
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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Overall Evaluation
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Excellent
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Very Good
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Adequate
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Fair
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Poor
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NAME:
GRADE:
Does the paper have a thesis that states the subject of
the essay, a clear perspective on that subject, and provides a roadmap for
the rest of the essay? (20 points)
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Does the thesis (and the rest of the essay) respond
directly to the assignment, which asks “Does Malcolm X in ‘Learning How to Read’ agree with Frederick Douglass
that education will set him free”? (20
points)
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Do the supporting paragraphs begin with a signpost and
include specific, well chosen examples that support the thesis well? (30
points)
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Does the writer explain why each example supports the
thesis? (20 points)
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Does the writer use a front door opener?
(10 points)
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Has the writer completed all the prewriting and workshop
activities? (-10 points if not
completed)
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Does the writer have both signatures from the writing
center? (-10% for each missing
signature)
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Grade breakdown:
95-100 points=A, 90-94=A-, 86-89=B+, 83-85=B, 80-82=B-, 76-79=C+,
73-75=C, 70-72=C-, 66-69=D+, 63-65=D, 60-62=D-, 59 and below=F.
If you decide to revise this essay, your revision is due a
week after you receive your graded essay, at the beginning of class. I will average this grade with your revised
grade. I would highly recommend taking
this sheet with your essay to the writing center for review before you begin
working on your revision.
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